Screenshot / British Seaside Town

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  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Other than the unfortunate lack of texture (all the buildings are basically flat and white) there are some nice things here. It's a seafront place, and yet all the buildings are really clean; surely with the sea breeze they would be slowly crumbling. At least they'd be made out of brick or wood or something like that. [the vines are a nice start]

     

    Really not a fan of the underground queue. It just randomly appears in the middle of the street(?), there's no grand "this is the queue for the ride" it's just...there. I think it would look a lot better if you rework the queue line so as an absolute minimum it starts at the end of street. At least that would allow a much better introduction to the ride.

     

    The bridge is kind of cool and I like some of the details you've started add on the wharf (like that ladder and the vines).

     

    I personally dislike the green and blue colour combination on the coaster, but that's just me...decent start.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    It's cute, and the building styles (except brick tower at the end) are very british.

     

    I do think there is a lack of texture, and the buildings are very flat faced. Try adding some detail, some window sills, shutters, drain pipes, all this will add depth to the buildings.

     

    Good start!

  • trav%s's Photo

    Oh man I should find Clovelly again. 

     

     

    My main issue with this is the lack of texture and it just doesn't look particularly British. Or not a place that would have a big B&M roaring through it anyway.

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