Screenshot / Splitter and Kiddie Area

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 10 years ago

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  inthemanual Offline

  Your buildings are all giant boxes. take a look at other architecture around the site and see that it's not so big, not so bulky, and has a lot of texture and life to it that this is missing. You do seem to be breaking up the forms a little bit, so you show potential to improve, but i think this could be a lot better with more thought put into the architecture.

  posted 10 years ago

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  Dusty Soul Offline

  Yeah, I definitly need to practice more with building design.  

  posted 10 years ago

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  Lotte Offline

  you'll get there! we all started out somewhere and if you keep working on it, maybe even trying to imitate some of the small tricks that other people on this site use you'll defnitely improve!

  posted 10 years ago

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