Screenshot / Fjord Rafting

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  BelgianGuy Offline

  the ideas are there, like the turns on the rapids and the guardrails but the execution is lacking even for ncso... also try spicing up the station, what does that building mean in the story of the ride, how does it bring that message across? the drop out of the station can use som more details, like a woodie track next to it as some for of safeguard, a sort of pumping mechanism or waterworks to show where the water is coming from and that ki,da jazz, like I said you have a basic grasp of composition, now try and build on that with making your buildings and rides tell the viewer something.

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  JJayMForce Offline

  I don't agree with the low voting on this at all.  This is freaking nice,  and I like the whole screen.  Your control of areas, and making everything look realistic with such a limited palet is really good. I think it could do with a tad more color here and there, but you did an awesome job, wulfi.

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