Screenshot / Beach Resort 2

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  Liampie Offline

  Is this Vermillion City?

   

  I liked the other screen better. Unlike the other screen there's no flow here. The angular path, palm trees dwarfed by the (good looking!) architecture, the unexplainable blue blocks, the fence chaos (too many types)... You can do better!

   

  I'd make the 4 wide path go all the way down onto the beach instead of narrowing to 2 wide and then taking a turn. The coaster is high enough to let the path go under it. Make the palm trees taller somehow and make the planters look bigger (put quarterblocks around it?). The improvement will be massive!

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  Lotte Offline

  
  

  Is this Vermillion City?

   

   

  the music from pokemon fire red that you get when on the sevii islands would be perfect for this

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  dinosaurfour Offline

  
  

  Is this Vermillion City?

   

  I liked the other screen better. Unlike the other screen there's no flow here. The angular path, palm trees dwarfed by the (good looking!) architecture, the unexplainable blue blocks, the fence chaos (too many types)... You can do better!

   

  I'd make the 4 wide path go all the way down onto the beach instead of narrowing to 2 wide and then taking a turn. The coaster is high enough to let the path go under it. Make the palm trees taller somehow and make the planters look bigger (put quarterblocks around it?). The improvement will be massive!

   

  I agree about making the trees higher and the planters bigger, I'll try it. Maybe the blue blocks lack context, I haven't really shown enough to give a good feel of this area. Thank you for the advice!

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  csw Offline

  I remember this! Good to see it's still alive. 

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