Park / Illegal Burnout's at the Gold Coast

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Therty%s's Photo

    The little buildings shine more here to me than the big red one, but this is quite a nice little scene. The highlight is the beach / rocks / stairs, I really love the rocks, the foliage, and the little under-bridge boardwalk. Cool little map!

  • Goliath123%s's Photo

    I didn't know the goldy had New york apartments

  • slimcrusty%s's Photo

    I didn't know the goldy had New york apartments

     

     

    hahahaha shhhhh, it dose ok. But for my defence these heritage styles/designs are defiantly present in the gc cbd as well as all capitols all over aus. Also as an Australian it's my rite to just steal stuff from every other nation and claim it as my own. but yes very random as pumped it out quick, with intention of posting it fast. Otherwise it would just be a half finished thing dying with the rest of my saves,It was hard not to repeat my trend of never sharing and just wondering.

  • posix%s's Photo

    I think this is a nice debut. You're clearly already quite good at the game in my eyes, and I cannot see you not win accolades at NE if you submit a Design or Spotlight eligible map.

     

    As I said in the discord announcement, you have a keen eye for colour which is great to see. I've never seen anything from you that wasn't expressive, and I think it's important to have that. Any more technical improvements and refinements can come later along the way.

     

    Very keen to see what you do next.

  • Babar Tapie%s's Photo

    I love it, I'm really happy to see someone working at this level of detail and life. This (first??) park is full of promise: diagonals to break the grid, detail, crunch, desire to break the map's edges...
     

    A few minor criticisms for the future:
    -The foliage : I'm not sure about the objects and colours, especially the flowers on the beach. I'd personally go for tols grass for example, which is more discreet imo. This green also looks very flashy.
    -Palette/colors choice (but this will surely come in time). 

    It's an excellent little park , please keep up the good work ! Evolution will come quickly without you even realising it !
  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    Great to see work from you dude, this is a blast. Colors and overall vibe is on point. Foliage could use some refinement, but the broad strokes are certainly there. Love the crunch.

     

    Good stuff!

  • Lurker%s's Photo

    For a small park with no rides or music this packs in a ton of action, love all the peep scenes in this. Really gets the busy city feel across, also that object choice for the burnout smoke is pretty cool, great use of that animated object.

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Very nice release. Very detailed, it keeps my attention despite the lack of rides or movement or any noise or music. Much to see, a lot of cool scenes created with the peep objects.

     

    Architecture is really good. Also love the skate park, the best one I've ever seen in rct I think. The crunch game is a hit on the paths, a miss on the beach. A bit too much use of the straight pieces. But you'll get there!

     

     

    I said it before and I'll keep repeating myself. Please don't blacktile at the same ground level of the park/water. Let the park rise out of the void ;) 

  • slimcrusty%s's Photo

    Gentlemen, you're thoughts and constructive criticism honestly mean the world too me. this community is truly something else. 

     

    thank you so much.  

     

    Also Fred, Never again will i void tiles the same level as terrain or water. You have my word.

  • nin%s's Photo

    Very fun, unique submission. Gonna deep dive into this later, but looks like a really great release!

  • RWE%s's Photo
    Although a lot of the stuff was already seen on the screens, this was a very lovely release to check out. You definitely have a great talent to create fun little scenes. I just love the atmosphere of this.

    Can't wait to see more from you, maybe on a larger scale. I will follow your development with excitement!
  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    The three smaller buildings are great, I liked the details and colors. The skate park is great and everything around the skate park is nice, great details. I loved the arch on the bridge and the path under the bridge is perfect in my opinion. The stairs leading to the beach are excellent but could have been even better with less foliage. I loved the rocks on the beach, they added charm. The car accident was good. The details you added near the bridge, fire, peeps, etc... I couldn't have done better, it was very good.
    I'm not an expert because I'm still learning from the members here.
    I thought the big red building was nice, it just needed some other color to break the ice (you know what I mean?), like to make it stand out better, like to break up the big red.
    The beach was charming, just in my opinion a few more peeps and a lot less grass and maybe even put some trash without exaggerating. For example, put hotdogs and ice cream on the beach to give it a special touch and some peeps buying hotdogs and ice cream. Also put a police officer on the beach next to a bike, as if the police officer was using the bike to keep watch. Overall a good job, I liked it and had fun looking at it. (note: I liked the cropping of the map, the edges looked good)
     

     

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo


    Very nice release. Very detailed, it keeps my attention despite the lack of rides or movement or any noise or music. Much to see, a lot of cool scenes created with the peep objects.

     

    Architecture is really good. Also love the skate park, the best one I've ever seen in rct I think. The crunch game is a hit on the paths, a miss on the beach. A bit too much use of the straight pieces. But you'll get there!

     

     

    I said it before and I'll keep repeating myself. Please don't blacktile at the same ground level of the park/water. Let the park rise out of the void ;)

     

    yes, I agree with you FredD, it seems like the best skate park I've ever seen 

  • slimcrusty%s's Photo

    NIN,RWE thanks heaps guys much appreciated.

     

    sorry rwe, I didn't realise that you're kind of suppose to keep it hidden for release lol. ahhh it's a learning curve, but love the feed back especially from players such as yourself. 

     

     

    MrTycoonCoaster, you are a absolute legend my guy. such kind words mate very glad you like it. I have been loving your screen shots also. The fact that you make the effort to comment and show a bit of love for everybody's work just tells me that you're a really good egg.

     

    thanks heaps mate.