Park / Libertarian Loop

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 2 years ago

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  Astroturd Offline

  I really like what you've done with Escape Hatch.

  posted 2 years ago

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  This is sort of a wild collection of ideas, but it's got a notable fun factor to it. Some really nice little NCSO tricks slipped in (love the shuttle). Really characteristic of the builders, I think. Enjoy that train station a lot.

  posted 2 years ago

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  Luketh Offline

  I recall swapping the name from Liberty to Libertarian Loop and making the station queue themed to a DMV wait line, then passing it along. So that's all I can take credit for. Great job to my contemporaries on fleshing this out, it's a real pleasure to be included alongside your names on this little design.

   

  Also deserving of kudos is dr dirt for so sneakily tricking everyone into making these designs thru his discord weekly contest series.

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  Jappy Offline

  Funny little design! Love the use of the cliches here! Also great layout, one of the few times I was actually captivated by a layout. Weird to say, I know, but something stuck with me. 

   

  Archy is nice if a tad simple. Foliage on the other hand is great though!

  posted 2 years ago

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  posix Offline

  Sorry to be the low vote on this. Just to give any feedback quickly:

   

  - I thought the openness of the coaster and landscaping were too simple and lacked finesse and aesthetic touch. I do however like the classic greenery look you've gone for.

  - The "city" part also looked a bit empty to me. I thought the red line in the middle of the paths did not look good, and there was a similar feeling of refinement lacking style here for me.

  - What you've done architecturally is good. The experimentation I think helps to develop future ideas. But it's not coming together as an overall language here. It looks more like bits and bobs, and a lack of artistic command.

   

  I would expect it all to emerge and come together for you though with some continued practice.

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  Liampie Offline

  Posix makes some good points, and I'd like to add that I don't really understand the theme. I can connect some dots, but then there's also some random crap like the candy carousel. Not sure what the purpose is, but the little traffic jam on go kart track near the transfer section is a nice idea - if only it was implemented in a more meaningful and less obscured way. Space shuttle sculpture also nice. It's a nice collection of random ideas.

   

  I like the coaster. Escape Hatch is nicely themed.

   

  Maybe the lack of spatial organization is part of the libertarian theme?

  posted 2 years ago

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