Park / Black Hole Mini Golf

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  Lurker Offline

  This was a nice entry, I like the whole idea of a sci-fi/industrial mini golf, and this was fun to look through. Some nice use of the "DKSO" re-colorable version of add on objects too.

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  Levis Offline

  Now this is the kind of stuff I want to see more off! Very creative idea!
  I like the music, it really fits the theme and I also like how you did the fans under the factory.
  The solor panels are done very clever too!
  
  
  Would have loved to actually see some of the staff you are mentioning in the description. I couldn't find any of them .
  
  Also found it a bit of a share that the entrance was just a path leading to the edge. Think you could for example have made that like a helicopter platform to make it feel more in line with the general idea.
  
  The waterflow to the garden is nice but would have loved to see where that water is coming from instead of seamingly spawning from a wall even if you have changed the texture there to some kind of mesh so it looked like the water was flowing from it that would have seemed nicer I think.
  
  Overall a very creative idea. Keep going like this and try to work on adding some more details! You seem to have some really good idea's. I think if you just push that little bit further and once you have something like this try to add those extra small details to really tell your story that it can go to something really special!

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