Park / Ouija Boardwalk
- 29-October 21
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56.50%(required: 65%)
Design Submission
In:Cities 70% CoasterCreator9 60% Jappy 60% Liampie 60% saxman1089 60% Terry Inferno 60% G Force 55% RWE 55% Scoop 55% posix 50% Xtreme97 50% chorkiel 45% 56.50% -
Description
"A once-prosperous pier park, now abandoned and decrepit, is brought back from the dead by eerie visitors at night..."
An older park of mine, from the DKMP pier contest in October 2020. All NCSO except for custom palette. - 1 fan Fans of this park
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Liampie Offline
Haven't opened the park yet, but: great park name.
ottersalad Offline
Really cool little park here, and properly spooky for Halloween. Archy is decrepit and dull and sells the atmosphere really well. The coaster is great too. Only gripe I had is that the ghost train building was a tad underdetailed when compared to everything else. Overall, enjoyable.
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I found the palette to be distracting at first, but when opened and seeing the context it made more sense. Nice work on selling the decrepit state of the park! I like the contrast between the clean street opposite. Only criticism is that it might be a tad too cramped for my liking. Some space would've helped here.
G Force Offline
Plugged in the final vote here. While I did like this a good bit I don't think it was a good for a design submission since it didn't really feel like the focus was on the coaster but more the park itself and the atmosphere/concept.
Probably would have voted %60 if it was a spotlight submission.
Obviously very Riverview inspired and that probably hurt the concept for me a bit it was still well done considering the size and especially for NCSO where pulling off theming like this is more difficult.
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Terry Inferno Offline
Design was simply the wrong accolade for this, as it's easily in the high-Bronze/low Silver range, but the coaster itself is not the selling point. This little snippet of an abandoned, haunted park comes together quite nicely, and though the object usage could use some tidying up (I do wish the New York Roof Piece trend would end in the DKMP circle), the overall shapes work very well here as a whole.
With all the neat details you've thrown in here, my favorite is actually the simplest--the guests entering the park from the graveyard monument. Very subtle, yet essential to the atmosphere once you see it.