Park / Seacoast Speeder
- 05-September 20
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I made this hypercoaster for the DKMP hypercoaster back in June. It didn't score too well (28th place) but I think it might work well as an NE design submission. I also tried to improve it a bit by adding some more decorations to break up the path as well as fixing the spots where guests get stuck. Credit to Skiffa for the lighthouse design, which I copied.
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battle boy Offline
A perfect place for a tourist tired of a long walk. Give tired feet a breath. Almost nothing is missing here. But there's hardly anything here either. No vice. Perhaps that was what it was about. Maybe locally, apart from the ocean, there are no major attractions - it is, at least, a roller coaster.
nin Offline
I teared up reading your comment, battle boy.
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Liampie Offline
Nin means that your comment was so beautiful that it made him cry. In fact, I'm crying too right now. It's poetry.
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RobDedede Offline
Uhh I just work here.
ottersalad Offline
Overall this was pretty nice. One thing that might've made this stand out more was if the turnaround was around the lighthouse and you tucked the coaster closer to the shore line. Queue area for the Morgan was pretty bland.. but your archy including the church was well done.
In:Cities Offline
JUSTIFY YOUR ANGER NIN
Xtreme97 Offline
Not a bad coaster, the layout is decent and I liked the turnaround, maybe you could have done a bit more with it like otter says. The overall map is a bit barebones and sparse, and the buildings feel like a collection of unrelated styles, but the church stands out well. The way the first drop dives under the shipwreck piece is a nice element as well and the lighthouse is pretty cool.
Cocoa Offline
not bad! I think the theme is a bit hard to place- it almost feels like a showcase of common/popular ncso building tropes from the last couple years. path and park layout is perhaps a bit blocky.
bigshootergill Offline
Decent release here, you're on the right track with your coaster, supports and archy. I'd like to see some more atmosphere and life on the pathways. Add lamps, trash cans, break up the paths with gardens/trees more. You clearly have creativity so you just need to keep pushing yourself to improve in some of these other areas. Keep it going!