Park / Zwarte Zwaluw

  • 07-June 07

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    Edited by bobo1981, 06 June 2007 - 05:12 PM.

    posted 17 years ago
  • woofenskid%s's Photo
    United States woofenskid Offline
    That's some cool shit. I love it.
    posted 17 years ago
  • Tornado6%s's Photo
    United States Tornado6 Offline
    Those are some pretty good screens.
    posted 17 years ago
  • hpg%s's Photo
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    Looks pretty nice, the kiddie coaster screen is by far the weakest of the screens though.

    All the rest look rather good. Nice simplicity IMO although I'm sure a lot of people here will criticize this for it.
    Also, while the simplicity can be good, you still could use a bit more detail ...especially in the landscaping.
    posted 17 years ago
  • JJ%s's Photo
    United Kingdom JJ Offline

    bit more detail ...especially in the landscaping.


    He always ignores that. Stupid gay fucker :(

    I like the screens though! But listen to hpg!
    posted 17 years ago
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo
    United States tracidEdge Offline
    use better colors. they're so boring right now.
    posted 17 years ago
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Metropole Offline
    The main thing that irks me is the supports, you could have used a better alternative, even if it isn't necesarily Toon's B&M ones.

    The park looks generally over-treed to me

    The kiddie rides buildings are very awkward

    Not sure about the point of Goliath jr.

    And I generally agree with Tracid on your colouring.

    But it shows potential, a few neat sections/ideas and a basic ground on which to expand. Keep it up

    PS. Moved to place to release your parks, as this has a download link!
    posted 17 years ago
  • Gwazi%s's Photo
    United States Gwazi Offline
    Looked pretty good.

    Zwarte Zwaluw = Black ____?
    posted 17 years ago
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    inVersed Offline
    The two biggest issues with this park that I could really see is the lack of depth in the the park (everything is so flat and the terrain is so boring) and the foliage (it seemed so scattered and did not seem to be thought out).

    Otherwise you had some pretty neat stuff going on here. I liked some of the coaster layouts
    posted 17 years ago
  • Nokia%s's Photo
    United States Nokia Offline
    it would have been to nice to see a better and bigger station on Talon but everything else looks great.
    oh and try to put names on your rides.
    posted 17 years ago
  • Ling%s's Photo
    United States Ling Offline
    that figure eight design on the kiddie coaster is pretty nice... and the bigger one doesn't look bad either.
    posted 17 years ago
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo
    United States tracidEdge Offline
    wait i thought this was in the ad district when i posted my comment.

    but keep it there for future reference.
    posted 17 years ago
  • Midnight Aurora%s's Photo
    United States Midnight Aurora Offline
    That rising turn in the second screen rocks my world.
    posted 17 years ago
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Metropole Offline

    PS. Moved to place to release your parks, as this has a download link!

    ^Tracid
    posted 17 years ago
  • JJ%s's Photo
    United Kingdom JJ Offline

    Looked pretty good.

    Zwarte Zwaluw = Black ____?


    Swallow. I think :-/
    posted 17 years ago
  • Emergo%s's Photo
    Netherlands Emergo Offline

    Swallow. I think :-/


    ^Yep, Swallow is the translation.

    Emergo
    posted 17 years ago
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo
    United States tracidEdge Offline

    ^Tracid

    good call.
    posted 17 years ago