Park / Zwarte Zwaluw

07-June 07

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bobo1981 Offline

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Edited by bobo1981, 06 June 2007 - 05:12 PM.
posted 17 years ago
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woofenskid Offline

That's some cool shit. I love it.
posted 17 years ago
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Tornado6 Offline

Those are some pretty good screens.
posted 17 years ago
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hpg Offline

Looks pretty nice, the kiddie coaster screen is by far the weakest of the screens though.

All the rest look rather good. Nice simplicity IMO although I'm sure a lot of people here will criticize this for it.
Also, while the simplicity can be good, you still could use a bit more detail ...especially in the landscaping.
posted 17 years ago
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JJ Offline

bit more detail ...especially in the landscaping.

He always ignores that. Stupid gay fucker

I like the screens though! But listen to hpg!
posted 17 years ago
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tracidEdge Offline

use better colors. they're so boring right now.
posted 17 years ago
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Metropole Offline

The main thing that irks me is the supports, you could have used a better alternative, even if it isn't necesarily Toon's B&M ones.

The park looks generally over-treed to me

The kiddie rides buildings are very awkward

Not sure about the point of Goliath jr.

And I generally agree with Tracid on your colouring.

But it shows potential, a few neat sections/ideas and a basic ground on which to expand. Keep it up

PS. Moved to place to release your parks, as this has a download link!
posted 17 years ago
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Gwazi Offline

Looked pretty good.

Zwarte Zwaluw = Black ____?
posted 17 years ago
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inVersed Offline

The two biggest issues with this park that I could really see is the lack of depth in the the park (everything is so flat and the terrain is so boring) and the foliage (it seemed so scattered and did not seem to be thought out).

Otherwise you had some pretty neat stuff going on here. I liked some of the coaster layouts
posted 17 years ago
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Nokia Offline

it would have been to nice to see a better and bigger station on Talon but everything else looks great.
oh and try to put names on your rides.
posted 17 years ago
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Ling Offline

that figure eight design on the kiddie coaster is pretty nice... and the bigger one doesn't look bad either.
posted 17 years ago
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tracidEdge Offline

wait i thought this was in the ad district when i posted my comment.

but keep it there for future reference.
posted 17 years ago
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Midnight Aurora Offline

That rising turn in the second screen rocks my world.
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Metropole Offline

PS. Moved to place to release your parks, as this has a download link!
^Tracid
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JJ Offline

Looked pretty good.

Zwarte Zwaluw = Black ____?

Swallow. I think
posted 17 years ago
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Emergo Offline

Swallow. I think

^Yep, Swallow is the translation.

Emergo
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tracidEdge Offline

^Tracid
good call.
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