Park / Lakeside Amusement Park

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  posted 5 years ago

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  Cocoa Offline

  this is small but had some nice charm to it. I particularly liked the spanish-style peninsula- good atmosphere there. The virginia reel also had a good vibe and I'd like to have seen that expanded as a larger and more complete area/ride.

   

  one tip- maybe choose a slightly punchier name that "seaside (or lakeside? make up your mind!) amusement park". Such a generic name makes it hard to remember!

  posted 5 years ago

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  ottersalad Offline

  Hey now, Lakeside Park sounds familiar!!
  Agree with Cocoa that there was a lot of charm here and neat ideas. A larger coaster.. even a family coaster.. would’ve been a great addition.
  Also maybe more variety in color would help. You seemed to rely heavily on the same shades of green, red, and brown.
  Good stuff though.. look forward to a bigger park next time!

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  Mynock Offline

  I really liked this. I think you captured the vintage vibe really well. I had fun checking out all the small details.

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  Pretty decent little park here. You seem to have a good grasp of the basics and there are some lovely elements here such as the Pagoda Falls ride and the cycle ride buildings. The green and brown stuff wasn't really to my taste but the forms and atmosphere there are good. Hope to see more work!

  posted 5 years ago

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