Park / Gwyn Lake Theme Park

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  posted 7 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Glad to finally see some solo work from you, considering how influential your benches have been the past 5 years.  This was a pretty nice little park, definitely liked how Timberhawk towered over the entrance and parking lot, cool moment there.  Theming around Apocalypse was nice too, creative use of staff.

   

  Overall a solid submission, a 60% in my eyes.

  posted 7 years ago

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  ottersalad Offline

  Timberhawk was a nice layout.. the first turnaround reminded me of the Villain at the old Geauga Lake park.

   

  The zipline over the water was cool. Definitely could see myself riding that!

   

  I enjoyed Apocalypse, and I agree with G on the theming, but showing a scene/cutaway of inside the building would've put it over the top.

   

  Really neat little park with some awesome little details.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Cocoa Offline

  lovely little realistic park. A bit simple and bare but pleasant enough. I quite liked the woodie layout and the dark ride part of the gerstlauer.

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  Version1 Offline

  Well done for the most part. Only problem I really have is the park planning, since I don't feel the park is large enough to support two coasters of that size.

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  RWE Offline

  Cute little park, glad to see this! It felt a bit plain here and there and the foliage was a bit weird in my opinion, but this definitely has some cute parts in it. My favorite things overhere are definitely the zipline and that little snack bar in front of the gerstlauer. That fountain in the middle of the lake was also pretty cool.

   

  All in all a nice park to check out! Good work! 60%

   

  #YesRWEcan

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  FredD Offline

  Cool little park,though if you inspired it on Oakwood than you should have included the rabbit dark ride   The two coasters are fun, especially the woodie. I like the Eurofighter too but I kinda dislike the way you built the dive loop, I'd go for a normal big inversion instead of a quarter loop and the going to straight pieces afterwards. 

   

  You definitely showed some skills with this, the entrance of the park is the best part of the park imo for example. Like said before, it all feels just a bit too bare, it needs more details. Foliage could use some more variety but the landscaping is great. One remark: shouldn't the waterfall be in the opposite direction? 

   

  A high bronze for me. Hard to give it a proper score, I feel like 55 is a bit too low but 60 is just a bit too high. 

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  SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

  Needs a coat of polish but I really like this park, especially the beyond vertical drop

  posted 7 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Very nice!

   

  It's a bit bare, but what's there is nice. The pacing on Apocalypse is a bit off putting but I love the look of the lift and the obvious Takabisha influence.

   

  The wood coaster and the surrounding areas were lovely.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  G Force: Thanks man, appreciate the feedback.
  Ottersalad: Thanks, glad you liked the zipline! I think if cutaway view had been around when I started I would have done the dark ride bit of Apocalypse fully.
  Cocoa: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
  V1: Thanks, I did consider extending the park somewhat down around the river but decided to keep it small in the end and just focus on the lake.
  RWE: Thanks for the comment, the foliage was probably my biggest struggle haha. Happy to see the zipline is well liked.
  FredD: Thanks, glad you liked the park. I didn't really think about the waterfall thing but you're right, haha. And that brer rabbit ride at Oakwood was nightmarish
  Sens: Thanks, think I got the drop method from Through the Ages. Happy that you liked it!
  Bill: I agree about the pacing and I think I should have reworked the layout. Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked the woodie.

  posted 6 years ago

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