Well, another release by me, and finally, a full park. My second completed park since Lost Isles, actually, Kingdoms takes visitors on a journey through time, exploring lost empires and time periods.
Most of the park was pretty much made in the entire month of january. It was never advertised, and not many people have seen it. Based heavily on Legends West and IOAH, this is the park that started the way I love to build now.
Hope you guys enjoy it. Read the readme for all other information.
You've definately gotten better since this. It's a shame you didn't win anything, but imho, I would't have given it runner-up either. It lacks that spark that makes it worthy of the title. Persia was definately your best area, with the dark ages behind it. Anyway, it was a great park.
This was quite a charming park with a few things that I would make sure you change in your next project:
- spelling (Bood instead of Blood on that mechanic...that sort of thing)
- cliched naming
- not naming staff
- no final brake run on coasters
- ride time settings default (I think you should lower the max waiting time so that there's always a train running)
- banners leading into areas (you have them one direction only)
- even out land underwater (things like that random 5x5 lowered bit of land in the lake are annoying)
But these are kind of nitpicking things. Your actual theming is lovely, understated. The coasters are all strong (if a little on the slow side at times, but that's no big deal) and I like your colours. So yes, I really enjoyed looking at it and i'm sure your next park will be just as good if not better. Good job.
mantis hit it spot-on, but i also found some of the park to be a bit redundant (i.e. two woodies, similar architecture and themes, etc.). but still, you're releasing so much in so little time. it's great. it's also a good way to fill up a parkmaker page.
oh, and props on the persia area. that stuff is tight.
very good that you can release a solo park. really establishes you as a parkmaker. for me, the park was average, but that doesn't matter. your productivity will lead you to great achievements, i'm sure. thanks for putting me in the park by the way. it's fitting since we both have the same heros, sa and js.
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yyo Offline
Well, another release by me, and finally, a full park. My second completed park since Lost Isles, actually, Kingdoms takes visitors on a journey through time, exploring lost empires and time periods.
Most of the park was pretty much made in the entire month of january. It was never advertised, and not many people have seen it. Based heavily on Legends West and IOAH, this is the park that started the way I love to build now.
Hope you guys enjoy it. Read the readme for all other information.
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Titan Offline
Did you send it for runnerup/spotlight?
yyo Offline
Marshy Offline
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mantis Offline
- spelling (Bood instead of Blood on that mechanic...that sort of thing)
- cliched naming
- not naming staff
- no final brake run on coasters
- ride time settings default (I think you should lower the max waiting time so that there's always a train running)
- banners leading into areas (you have them one direction only)
- even out land underwater (things like that random 5x5 lowered bit of land in the lake are annoying)
But these are kind of nitpicking things. Your actual theming is lovely, understated. The coasters are all strong (if a little on the slow side at times, but that's no big deal) and I like your colours. So yes, I really enjoyed looking at it and i'm sure your next park will be just as good if not better. Good job.
Steve Offline
oh, and props on the persia area. that stuff is tight.
Nic Offline
My major gripe was the width of the paths was a little wide, but thats just my personal taste.
Lovely job.
posix Offline
thanks for putting me in the park by the way. it's fitting since we both have the same heros, sa and js.