Park / Feuille Tremblante

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  posted 7 years ago

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  saxman1089 Offline

  I get to be the first to comment, huh?

   

  I generally liked the archy and the village, however, I don't like the bright red roofs. I think the bordeaux red would have been much better. (Later edit: it seems the roofs IRL are pretty bright, so this doesn't detract as much for me as it did before) 
  
  The coaster fits the "mountain coaster" type theme (I've got one nearby my house at a ski resort and its generally well done). The support work is good, especially for the bench we were given for this competition.
  
  I don't mind the fall-colored foliage, but I'm sure you're going to have people here comment on how much they hate it. I wish you would've added some more underbrush/shrubbery to make it feel more forest-y, but it looks okay as is.
  
  Car ride and canoe ride were also fun. Your boat looks like an MK creation though....
  
  I ultimately decided on a 55% for this. More details and better foliage (underbrush and shrubbery) would've pushed it to the next level for me.
  
  Nice job, can't wait to see what you do next!

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  Cute park. You pulled off the vibe of Mont-Tremblant pretty well; the red roofs are going to get a lot of comments but in my mind it's 50/50 either way with the game's colors. The alpine coaster and the canoes in the harbor are nice touches. Fall foliage looks nice, but it comes off as a little haphazard and chaotic. Underbrush is definitely something to consider in the future!

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  Cocoa Offline

  not sure what to make of this. some of it feels a bit underdetailed and flat, but some of it is still quite nice. I like the boat shed and the overall composure of the town is well done. maybe a bit of window overload but it does work in some places. I like fall foliage atmosphere but the trees and colors you chose felt a bit off. A bit plastic feeling maybe. also that leafy path is wacky

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  Julow Offline

  Nice work Supra ! 

   

  I really liked the village, the red roofs weren't a problem for me. Architecture is simple but was nice. I liked that place near the waterfront with the giant umbrellas.

   

  For me the problem was more about context and map composition. The map being square didn't help, everything looked too much planned : the village in a corner, the coaster in another, and the boardwalk in front of it. Having a bigger map would have helped a lot.

   

  Foliage was also too much planned. I like the idea of having those original trees but it didn't worked for me, looked too random and there was a contrast problem. 

   

  I really liked the Waving Seats ride but the other rides didn't do much for me : the truck ride wasn't very interesting and La Gambade wasn't very surprising. 

   

  I gave it 55% mostly because it wasn't ambitious enough, you're capable of much more than that, as seen with Tropicana for example.

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  Coasterbill Offline

  I like this.

   

  I don't think there's enough content for it to be accolade worthy, but what's there is nice. The village area was really nice and definitely the highlight, but La Gambade and the area around it was nice also, as was the waterfront.

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