Park / Oakwood Adventure Park

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  posted 7 years ago

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  Fisch Offline

  Some pretty cool elements that you used there. I like how all themed areas are on their own island. That's certainly a neat idea. What you want to do is make sure that you have more content in the actual areas. Less trees, more flatrides and stalls, some restaurants in places, etc.

   

  But it's a good start for a first park! Hope to see more from you in the future.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Cocoa Offline

  I think similar feedback to the one I gave for your other park applies here. Focus on composure, line of sights for peeps and the viewer (esp. with regard to trees), etc. Still some good areas and and bits and I liked the general park layout with the islands like that. thats what we should have done for mirage islands! keep at it though, you show some talented bits.

   

  also this is the weirdest map glitch I've seen in a while, but its actually a really neat effect if it could be reproduced or emulated somehow.

   

  

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