Park / Yankee Park @ Readington, NJ

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  posted 8 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  This is decent enough, but there really isn't much here. Wooden is cool, the looper layout is a little stretched with the long straight but supports are cool. I wish there were more "park" elements - no real buildings here and not a lot of the smaller flats I would expect for this size of family park.

  posted 8 years ago

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  battle boy Offline

  It looks clean and neat. Made very good.

  I think it must be an old park. There could be a bigger investor. The Mayor lying next to the town would like to collect more money for the lease of the area for this fun.

    The park attracts couples of lovers in peace and a place to spend romantic time there.

   

    As for me - it's all good, but the atmosphere seems "cool"

  posted 8 years ago

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  Iron Rattler Offline

  I think the best part of this for me is the color usage. It creates a very pleasant atmosphere. Obviously not having many buildings hurts this. But you seem to have already corrected that on  your next project and I look forward to seeing it

  posted 8 years ago

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  ][ nailed it for me; the layout is odd and there's not a whole lot to it.
  
  You've already improved with your current project, keep at it.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Julow Offline

  Those layouts are great and there is a very nice atmosphere. Why didn't you expand it? I would say maybe try using black tiles and have more landscaping, it would give your work more character, it looks too rectangular for me, but that's maybe just me. 

  Quality of the coasters layout, and their stations: 75%

  But there's not enough content and buildings: 55%. 

  Can't wait to see your next park that looks really promising. 

  posted 8 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  I liked this a lot, the park is a bit small but the atmosphere is really nice and this has a cute, fun vibe.

   

  My only critiques are that the Arrow layout is way too elongated which makes the interaction feel really forced, I think the path choice could have been better since the tarmac brings down the atmosphere a little bit and the crazy path accents are a bit awkward.

   

  45% from me because it's REALLY small and lacking in content, but very nice. The score is more a reflection of the size than the quality of work.

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  Cocoa Offline

  i feel like I've seen every square of this park in discord before I even download it. I'd love it if you spent some nice alone time with rct and developed a crispy design without checking in with the chat every 5 minutes. give yourself some space to develop your own style and experiment! and don't just copy the bland old realism that's so pervasive here

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  i feel like I've seen every square of this park in discord before I even download it. I'd love it if you spent some nice alone time with rct and developed a crispy design without checking in with the chat every 5 minutes. give yourself some space to develop your own style and experiment! and don't just copy the bland old realism that's so pervasive here
  

  
  Certainly agree with this.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I enjoyed the lake in the center of the roller coaster, gave a climate of peace and tranquility.
  I'm a fan entrances different rides, good work.

  posted 6 years ago

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