Park / Firehawk Recreation

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  posted 8 years ago

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  From a layout standpoint, it's not too bad - other than the fact that the first roll is banked the wrong way.

   

  The scenery feels really barebones and could use some refinement; the supports are okay but sort of messy in spots, you got some of the details like the tree row and the queue canopies right but the buildings and surroundings feel very undeveloped with a lack of detail and any foliage beyond the queue area.

   

  A promising start; looking forward to seeing what you can do in the future!

  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  I definitely felt you could of spent a bit more time on the landscaping here.  The land around the ride isn't perfectly flat like you show.

   

  But the layout and some of the design aspects of the ride show promise, just need to take a few more steps to better portray the ride as it truly appears.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  You clearly have skill and the coaster itself is actually quite nice.

   

  For this particular recreation you picked a ride that has absolutely no interesting terrain or surroundings whatsoever which is a shame, but I would have beefed it up a little one way or another and taken some creative liberties.

   

  If you focus more on theming and the surroundings you could do some amazing stuff, but even on it's own I actually like this quite a bit.

   

  40% on this one, but a design accolade is in your (near) future.

  posted 8 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  I feel like this would have been more interesting as an Xflight recreation than a Firehawk one; could have included Superman as well.

  posted 8 years ago

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