Park / Landsknecht
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19-January 14
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CoasterCreator9 60% Ling 60% csw 55% Jaguar 55% RWE 55% Cocoa 50% Scoop 50% ][ntamin22 50% Liampie 45% posix 45% Poke 40% Xeccah 35% 50.50% -
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called after german pikemen mercenaries operating in germany, the netherlands and france.
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not bad by any means, there just isn't much there. the layout is alright, and the architecture is passable, but just not very interesting. not much to see. keep on trying though, I'm sure you'll get there
I think the fact that I've been away 10 days without internet and I'm the only one to comment/rate this shows how little exposure new parks get. I know it would probably be a lot of work, but there really should be some sort of spot on the front page similar to how the screens work.
I know when/if I release something big (like Thoughts) I'd like it to get more enthusiasm than they maybe do now. please read this in a constructive tone of voice and not a critical/complaining one though 
Needs a bit more around it, like Cocoa said. The buildings aren't really integrated into the coaster itself, just off to the side. More interactions!
my bad, read january 14 as the date instead of the year
don't worry cocoa, i did read it as constructive, the fact that somebody like you even commented on my park feels like a compliment, usually my park goes ignored, and it feels like only the reddit community noticed my park.
but, tell me, how do i make it more interesting? balcony's, more colours and different textures?
Try to give the theme and architecture a purpose. Make the buildings and rides tell a story.
While the ride itself was quite solid, the theme didn't do much for me.
Like Faas said, rides should tell a story. Make the queue interact with the ride, make the queue build up tension for the ride (going through that castle for example instead of building it so far away). Besides the name I couldn't get any sense of the theme at all. The small supporting ride was a fun idea, but didn't do much for the theme either.
You're definately getting better and I'm glad you seem to enjoy building!
"MFG"
FABULOUS RIDE was very nice