Park / The First Avenger

Park_2884 The First Avenger

5 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    4 big offenses:

    WW/TT objects - few people can open parks with these, and even fewer parks actually look good with them.

    Border - Learn to use 8cars, and at least remove the border fence and lower the outside land, to get ride of the ugly and distracting border

    Land Textures - You used gray rock on the whole thing. Don't. It looks bad, it isn't realistic at all, and it looks bad.

    Foliage - You used a single foliage object on the whole park, and worse yet, it isn't even a complete tree. This object was meant to be used along with a trunk object to make larger trees, not to be used on it's own. It doesn't look good without the trunk.

    The theming was actually reasonably good. it was a fun little map, but there's definitely room for improvement.
  • colsen396%s's Photo
    well im a noobie so i dont know very much stuff like you experts do
  • csw%s's Photo

    well im a noobie so i dont know very much stuff like you experts do

    That's quite alright...I definitely don't consider myself an 'expert', but I do know how to have fun with the game and learn new things about it every day :) Do that and you'll succeed, my friend
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    We were all noobies once, man. I'm just trying to give you advice to improve so you'll be less noobie next time
  • colsen396%s's Photo
    and i just downloaded 8 cars so i will be better next time