Park / Discovery Island

  • 08-April 07
Park_2694 Discovery Island

47 Comments

  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    Posted parts of this park for Fiesta. Here's some more.

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    ^Screen unfinished.

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    Edited by Pineapple, 15 June 2007 - 02:09 AM.

    posted 18 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    New Entrance Area 'Caribe Plaza'

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    posted 18 years ago
  • Loopy%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Loopy Offline
    That looks pretty nice my only suggestion would be to break up that path a little with some foliage or something as theres quite a lot of it at the minute.

    Other than that I love it.
    posted 18 years ago
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    United States ][ntamin22 Offline
    that is indeed a large, large unbroken path area. the building facades are very niceindeed, but what's up with thei ground floors?
    posted 18 years ago
  • JJ%s's Photo
    United Kingdom JJ Offline
    The building are all identical.. Some variation will be good.
    posted 18 years ago
  • eyeamthu1%s's Photo
    United Kingdom eyeamthu1 Offline
    I like the building facades - simple, but realistic and effective. The main problem is the area of paving in front. I'd certainly break it up with some foliage. The screen is in desperate need of some greenery. And I'd maybe do something else with that sign - put it on one of the buildings for example?
    posted 18 years ago
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    United States Ride6 Offline
    The building in screen #3 (the last one in the first post) looks like total forced crap. Everything else looks pretty good however. As has been said the new screen needs some folidge. I think some nice 1-tile deep gardens of 1/4 tiles plants and shrubs along the base of a facade is in order; along with some full tile (but still reasonibly short) trees out a couple tiles in front of the ticket booths.

    Demolish the one building (it's not worth trying to save, believe me), and add some plants and you're well on your way to a winner. Oh yes, and I did notice the backbone you added to the B&M there, nice attention to detail.

    Ride6
    posted 18 years ago
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Metropole Offline
    that last screen is probably the least atmospheric screen I've ever seen. The boring ground floor facade stretching across all the buildings and the horrible coloured, over expansive path just sucks any life from it whatsoever. And there doesn't appear to be any way into those ticket booths.

    The other screens are much better, but I generally agree with Ride6
    posted 18 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    Well I just bring you this update as I got my interest back after LL.

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    Mexicana - 100% Complete
    Caribe Plaza - 80% Complete
    Area Underconstruction - 5% Complete

    OVERALL PARK - 70% Complete.
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    Complete Full Screen
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    Almost Complete
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    NP
    posted 18 years ago
  • zodiac%s's Photo
    United States zodiac Offline
    Definitely needs foliage. Those screens are very bare. Not really liking the footers for the impulse coaster, or the supports overall. They look a bit flimsy, and it looks like not many of those supports are connected. And, not a good idea to let your guests actually walk under the fucking track, because if this were real life, their heads would get chopped off as the train goes by. Architecture is pretty nice though. Keep it up.

    Edited by zodiac, 05 May 2007 - 10:07 AM.

    posted 18 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    In reply to footers/supports I've had to work with what I've got in the workbench.
    Foliage is to be added.
    If this was in real life the peeps would have to be about 10 - 15ft tall to be hit by that train.
    posted 18 years ago
  • zodiac%s's Photo
    United States zodiac Offline
    ^Do you have any quarter-tile blocks? Doesn't matter what texture, but that would be better than what you have. Sorry if I'm sounding harsh.
    posted 18 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    ^You're not being harsh. Lol. Oh and yeah footers will be changed. Thanks for the comments.
    posted 18 years ago
  • RCFanB&M%s's Photo
    Argentina RCFanB&M Offline
    I like it...you're developing a nice style man. But yeah, like dave said, you should add some foliage in that area. You could also vary a little bit on the structure and style of your buildings; it looks way to repetitive otherwise.

    EDIT: oh, there's going to be foliage in that area...ok, the I guess, that there's not another suggestion.
    posted 18 years ago
  • Lloyd%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Lloyd Offline
    Even if this is a fantasy park, i do think that the Impulse over the path is a little...well, risky. Who knows, maybe it'll look beter if it's all over water, not just the spike.
    posted 18 years ago
  • JDP%s's Photo
    United States JDP Offline
    I think those supports are a little too thin for the coaster. Something thicker would be better. I dont reall like how the coaster goes over the path but, its your work so you can do what you like with it.
    -JDP
    posted 18 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    New Screen.

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    posted 18 years ago
  • egg_head%s's Photo
    Germany egg_head Offline
    Now that's good! I like it very much. :mantis:
    posted 18 years ago
  • Faceman%s's Photo
    Germany Faceman Offline
    Much better than the first version.
    I love it!
    posted 18 years ago
  • zodiac%s's Photo
    United States zodiac Offline
    MUCH better. I'm loving it as well. The only thing that kinda picks at me is how the land under the water just falls out. Other than that, much, much better.
    posted 18 years ago