Park / Tradewinds
- 20-December 12
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13.75%(required: 50%)
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Casimir 20% Goliath123 20% Jonny93 15% Arjan v l 10% posix 10% Liampie 5% 13.75% - No fans of this park
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Shaman Offline
You should have added that entrance on the blue line of trams. I see where you meant to put it, but perhaps you forgot? It was just a small detail, it didn't really take away from the overall park experience.
Then again, as far as the voting shows, I guess I just don't understand what people look for in a park. Anyway, good job and better luck next time.
Edit: Happy birthday! :3
In:Cities Offline
Oh well. Better luck next time bud!
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Arjan v l Offline
Better late than never.
I'm not sure if you want comments, but i'm giving them anyway.
Good start for a first release.
You'll need to improve on many aspects if you want the score to raise for next releases.
Symmetry isn't neccesary a bad thing, but in this case it wasn't appealing, because it didn't make much sense.
You've placed 2 Tilted Whirlers next to each other, why?
Same goes for the coaster design, the symmetry isn't a bad thing but the coaster design, despite being a dueller, is poor.
The foilage needs a lot of work, it's just not appealing, since there's no variety in height and there aren't much different types of trees.
Architecture needs a lot of improvement.
Park layout needs improvement.
I hope i didn't offend you too much, i'm only trying to give valuable tips for your future projects.
Another tip.
I don't know how much you like the expansions WW and TT.
But if you remove those, then you will have more people to vote on your work.
And everybody would be able to open your park, because not many have WW and TT.
Also, if you download some parks from here, then you'll get a lot of customized items with it, also 'hacked' WW and TT items.
I've used WW and TT also, you can see in my profile, but i don't miss them one bit.
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Also, thanks for the positive comments, especially from you, Shaman. I'm glad you liked the coaster and the gardens. I was looking for a score a bit higher than 13.75%, but overall, I wasn't disappointed. And yes, I had a very happy birthday!
As for the park, I was going for a pretty simplistic layout. I'm more of an old school, play-for-fun kinda guy, but I tried broadening my horizons a bit for this park. This park was pretty fun to make, but I don't ever think I'll ever be a high caliber parkmaker. That being said, I probably am going to just go back to playing for fun, but who knows, I may still upload parks in the future. Thanks to everyone who took the time to check out my park />