Park / [TOC] - Jumbo Adventures Spain
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10-July 12
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It kinda felt H2H inspired by the size and how you filled the map.
I did feel like a lot of station buildings were rushed and that you guys didn't wanna really finish this anymore. The station of Guitarra Española and El Bosque Encantado were way to small. El O jo Loco and El toro didn't even have a station building. and El Toro was even a premade layout of the game, even though it was supported it pretty good. It felt like you just tried to fill the map but couldn't come up with your own layout.
The queues of some attractions were really strong, Guitarra Espanola was (in my eyes) the big star of the park and the ferris wheel had a queue line at least twice as big. A lot of hacks were well done although it weren't the hardest hacks. For El canon, you (probably accidentally) removed the ride.
I did like the sub sandwich restaurant, whereas it did look uninspired it also looked really cozy to eat there.
The bike tour was a bit crazy to me, I did not really get what the ride really was because the inside was just a checkered floor.
I also quite liked Duplo Grito and its building+queue, at least compared to the rest.
Another letdown was that the scales on some buildings looked off. The hotel was REALLY small and didn't really add something imo.
Other than that they were quite blocky and the details felt uninspired. The detailling was right sometimes but it feels like you added the details just for the sake of having details on the building and not so they would represent something.
All in all a great improvement but I feel like you guys can improve even further.
It was really fun to build this. BC had some great ideas (like the guitar) which he made pretty good IMO. El Cañon was a failed experiment by BC though. He wanted to make it invisible by changing it into Crooked House, but it didn't work, and we got a crooked house as attraction.We couldn't delete it because that caused an error trapper. I eventually made it as it had to be.
Then, El Toro wasn't premade.BC made it. He showed some pics in the dump place, when it was another track type and train type.
I did all the hacks I think.
The hotel was meant to be a hospital, it was built by me. I also built the station of the bike rental and hacked it. I made the little souvenir shop and I supported all rides except for Duplo Grito.
We will improve even further for sure, we have started other projects (with each other, with others, or solo). ATM I have like 4 projects, one is a solo NCSO park and the others CSO collabs.
I like this park, I think that the big star of the park, like chorkiel said, was "Guitarra Española". Mika was a good partner on this project and for a first contest, this park was not bad IMO. I did all the landscape, layouts, all the architecture except the souvenir shop and the Bike tour building, and I did also the supports of "Duplo Grito" witch was the first support work that I did.
Me and Mika were wishing to get 30%, it was really close!
Thanks for the feedback and more critical comments are welcome, please give a review for the park
BC
Definately needs work and atmosphere.
Not a bad park btw. ,but you definately should put more time ,effort and 'love' in there.
The foilage was boring and monotone, more variation in trees and bushes and the composition of those would have created more atmosphere, as well as more benches ,lights and fences. Also try to use the right deco for the style of architecture you've applied ,otherwise it doesn't look right.
Generally it all felt quite rushed. Nice to see you can hack, but it doesn't make it perfect just by that.
I don't want to put you both down ,but start working on above mentioned for a better result next time. I loved to see you two get an accolade in the future. So keep it up.
I'm sorry, but why not make your goal 100%? If you settle for less than first place then you'll end up last place.
BC/Mika, I like the park but I can definately see improvement in the buildings and foliage. I liked some of the layouts but a few were kind of awkward. Also try to vary the supports on some of the coasters. Both of you have improved loads with this and I hope you can continue to build up your skills.
That's a good thing, hold on to that.
We worked with fun but this didn't get any better because of time, there were some problems till the drop line (Mika crashed his RCT2 CD and I was on auditions to the theater school) so we didn't had so much time. For sure we will get better and better with time and this is just the start
will the points of this park appear on Mika and BC (me) status (Hall of Fame)?