Park / Wonder Showcase

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  posted 12 years ago

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  MCI Offline

  Pretty close one!
  I´m not sure If I like the park or not.
  There are some pretty good buildings wich I really liked
  
  But one the other hand there were very... not that good buildings like those:
  
  
  I also really liked some of the ideas in your park, like the note-lines, the guitar, the organ and the lightning impact around the LIM-Coaster. But the station of the coaster killed it for me. Ways to big, to much blue and to much glass. (IMO)
  
  
  The idea of the stage was pretty cool, but seemed to be out of place to me
  
  
  The parklayout seemed good to me and I really liked the foliage.
  Last but not least I didnt liked the coasterlayouts. They were "okay" to me, but not good.
  A very "negativ" review, but I think you´ve showed in H2H what you´re capable of and I´m really looking forward to your next project (besides the absolutely brilliant ncso park )
  
  Gruß
  MCI

  posted 12 years ago

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  chorkiel Offline

  This was a nice one! A lot of cool things in this park I thougt.
  I really liked 'rock around the block' and it's surroundings, the notes and the guitar and evertyhing.
  Qualifier had a cool layout too but felt a bit slow on some points. I did not like all the other rides really, they felt forced and mostly added for the sake of adding. Most of them had no or barely any theming which put this park a bit to a letdown. 500, drifter and wonderwheel for a good example.
  The architecture was good but a little blocky in the shapes.
  The foliage was really nice and fit really well most of the time.
  
  All in all this was a bit of a letdown compared to the classic but I'm sure this was created on forehand and therefore this does defenitily show your learning process with cso.

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  Six Frags Offline

  You definitely have talent, fizzix, keep building and you'll get that big accolade within time!
  Love the guitar

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  posix Offline

  Some really nice ideas in this and a demonstrated ability to translate a concept to RCT. Well done.
  
  The scale of this was too small for me though, and some parts did seem a bit half-assed.

  posted 12 years ago

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  In:Cities Offline

  Haha thanks for the band shoutout;]
  
  This really looks great though dude. I know you'll snag an accolade with your next attempt!

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  Maverix Offline

  The biggest problem I had with this was, while many of the ideas and structures were good alone, a lot of it didn't really come together as a whole. There wasn't much flow from one area to the next and it felt awkward and forced. The coasters were sub-par as well, not terrible, but you can do better.
  
  You should be proud of finishing this though and with a bit more refinment you'll land an accolade next time for sure!

  posted 12 years ago

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  Fizzix Offline

  Hey thanks guys! This was completed before The Classic, it just happened to be released after it. It was actually submitted the 8th of May, hah. To be honest, I wasn't sure if this would win or not. It was initially just me practicing on the H2H6 bench on the first night I got my computer back, and since there was nothing on my HD, I decided to just build on it and finish it. This is why there is a lack of flow and planning, really.
  
  The fact of the matter is, this was where I was at before building Th Classic. So this is one step behind that, and not an accurate gauge of my skill as of now.
  
  MCI: Thanks for the critique! As I said, it was really a lack of planing that killed some of this stuff. Th bad buildings in the Race area were the last I built, and I rushed, excited to get another release.
  
  chorkiel: You're right, it was built before The Classic. Thanks for all the critique!
  
  Six Frags: Thanks, it really means a lot to me. I didn't think anybody would like that guitar, hah.
  
  posix: Thanks, and yeah, a few things were rushed, or not re-done when they should've been.
  
  In:Cities: No problem haha! Thanks, I know I'll win with my next one
  
  Maverix: I completely understand the lack of flow, and overall awkwardness. As I said, this wasn't planned at all, and rather rushed to be honest. I was so pumped to be able to play, I just built this in a month. Thanks for the kind words!
  
  Really, thanks guys. Please understand that this was really my first recent use of CSO, so everything I built was something new to me. With that said, I'm really proud of this.
  
  Thanks for the votes, and Casimir for the maps!

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  I loved the park Fizzix. Loads of great ideas like the music notes on the wall and I love the Sweets Shop building. Sad to see this didn't win an accolade but the problem I found with it was that each building was very seperated from each other and thus the park didn't seem to come together as nicely as I'd have hoped. Still, for a first attempt at custom scenery, you'd did very good. I hope you get an accolade next time and I can't wait to see new work from you

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  Hex Offline

  That guitar was really nicely executed. I agree with MCI. There were some really nice buildings, and then there were the meh buildings.

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  Cocoa Offline

  with a bit more refinement in terms of architecture and layout, you could easily be there. Your use of colors and atmosphere is very nice.

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  BC(rct2) Offline

  this park is great! I just didn't like the buildings on the race zone, and the piano on the building should be visible, the rest looks fine.

  posted 12 years ago

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