Park / IOA Hollywood

Park_2341 IOA Hollywood

327 Comments

  • Blitz%s's Photo
    love it.
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    This new screen is somewhat better, however I really can't say I like either one of the screens. Everything just seems so choppy throughout the screen and the architecture just doesnt really look appealing. I also am not realling feeling how close the ride is to the edge of the map i just looks kinda awkward. On the positive side I like the creativity that seems to breathe from every screen you have shown
  • yeshli2nuts%s's Photo
    ^the ride is right in the middle of toon lagoon. i blacked out the areas around the ride that i dont want to show.
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    ^I see that will probably flow a better since its in the lagoon. I really wouldve have looked awkward at the edge of the map
  • Grand Admiral%s's Photo
    Maybe try creating a flow from Suess Landing to Toon to Superheros? :nod:
  • Jazz%s's Photo
    It's definitely creative, and it uses a unique selection of colors. Besides that, however, it's quite below-average for the following reasons:

    1) Inconsistency. Nothing seems to flow, it's just a large cluster of numerous textures and colors that don't work together.

    2) Foilage. The foilage is subpar IMO, it's just the generic selection of tropical foilage. Maybe add some more whole trees in there, and nothing really seems to blend together.

    However on a postitive note, there's definitely a cartoony feel as well as many water features, which sort of makes up for the negative factors a bit. Overall, it just looks as if it needs to be cleaned up and more organized, because nothing doesn't really flow.

    ~Jazz~
  • yeshli2nuts%s's Photo
    Uh oh! I don't think this is where our boat is supposed to go...

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  • inVersed%s's Photo
    This screen has some of the best IOA atmosphere than any other screen you have shown yet. Good work
  • JDP%s's Photo
    ...good teaser
  • RCFanB&M%s's Photo
    Pretty nice...I really like how you developed the Jurassic Park theme. And as inVersed said...it's one of the best IOA atmosphere than any other screen you have shown...
  • postit%s's Photo
    try to add some more knobs and crap to the inside of those walls. Also it would be better if the shoreline was closer to the boats.
  • JKay%s's Photo
    Cool screen Yesh. I'm liking the "enticement" factor as the ride enters what appears to be an indoor section. The grey building looks ok except that it looks like you haven't hacked it underwater and I think there's one baseblock missing just as the boats enter immediately to the left. The large grey space at the top looks a bit monotonous, unless you plan to add more there.

    Looking forward to this one!
  • yeshli2nuts%s's Photo
    I gipped you again with the last picture so heres this:

    http://www.approcom....Adventure_1.JPG

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  • JKay%s's Photo
    Other than some shotty landscaping, that's a great screen.
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo
    those waterfalls to the side looks so plain. i really think they could benefit from some rapids/splashes. otherwise, looks nice.
  • eman%s's Photo
    Doesn't do much for me. There's so little detail that I find it hard to get into the atmosphere in the least. I know the real building has little detail too, but I've always thought the Jurrasic Park buildings could use more detail anyways.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    same as i said on Tn- invisible track for the rapids.
    ripsaw falls looks great, jagged rocks aside.
  • ACEfanatic02%s's Photo
    That wall has enough room for a great mosaic... it's too plain right now.

    The foliage isn't all that good either. Put some thought into it, not just 'bush,bush,bush,tree,bush,bush'

    -ACE
  • RCFanB&M%s's Photo
    Pretty nice...
    The foliage looks quite good. The ride is very similar to the real one.
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    I am with JKay on this one... I think the landscaping is quite poorly done, but overall its very nice. Looks very IOA-like. Good stuff man