Park / El Matador

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  Comment System Offline

  posted 13 years ago

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  RCTMASTA Offline

  For NCS, this is decent...the coaster, anyway. The roofs were kind of bland, didn't really match the other colors, and were unattractive, and I didn't really see the point of that Giga Coaster track. The foliage also looks quite "preplanned" in spots...
  Hmm...
  Layout: +30% Good, but not all that great.
  Foliage: -15% No.
  Architecture: -5% ...meh. Not feeling it.
  Supports: +5% The support work helps it, at least.
  Overall: 15% The layout was somewhat entertaining-though the pacing near the end kind of hurt my opinion of it.
  
  In the future, I'd suggest adding some kind of protective fence around the coaster- not just on the outside edge, where it doesn't do any good against preventing guests from going where they shouldn't. And if you ever get into using CS, the 1/8-tile deco blocks are great for wooden coaster footers.

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  nin Offline

  The coaster was beautiful. The surroundings, not so much. I wish you'd take this layout, or a bit of an updated one (as this had its share of slow spots/bad pacing) and up the surroundings a bit, perhaps even ditching the "this is within a park" theme and just go all out. I think then you'd find it much easier to build and play.

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  Liampie Offline

  This shows some talent. Try to work on your composition (most importantly ride/theming/path interactions and sightlines), and try to use some more colour. Looking forward to seeing more of you.
  
  By the way, I like that you're from Mexico.

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  In Flames Offline

  Thank you guys, I will consider all your comments in my next projects.

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  posix Offline

  I agree it shows promise. I like your focus on naturalness. You have started to develop a sense for aesthetically pleasing greenery. I think you might want to put more thought into your architecture. Only buildings with enough function they must serve make enough sense and will give you interesting design ideas.
  
  Do you have plans on what to build next already? I'm curious.

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  In Flames Offline

  I was thinking about to do a park all in spanish (NCS)but I don't know.

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