Park / Thunder River National Park

Park_1980 Thunder River National Park

5 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    posted 13 years ago
  • tdub96%s's Photo
    tdub96 Offline
    unfinished? This looked so good in the AD...
    posted 13 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    Wow, this was amazing.

    - Teravolt is fanastic. Unrealistic, but spectacular as fuck. A blast to watch!
    - Dynamo had way too many underground parts, but it had some great moments too. The first drop ins unbelievable and the station area is just as great.
    - The suspended coaster (Remah?) was also great, but in some places also too cluttered. It could've been a little shorter. :)
    - Landscaping was awesome. My only complaints actually are the unsmooth transitions of terrain where it hits the water and the shitpiles down the waterfalls. The mountains are flawless.
    - Foliage can use some work I guess. Vary the density and make it look less filler.
    - Architecture is your main weakness, although it had its moments (Dynamo station). Practice!

    Overall great job! You're certainly one to watch, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Hopefully something you'll finish.
    posted 13 years ago
  • tdub96%s's Photo
    tdub96 Offline
    I hope he actually finishes this at some point. And if he doesnt, maybe someone else could give it a go...
    posted 13 years ago
  • Sephiroth%s's Photo
    United States Sephiroth Offline
    Thank you for the detailed reply Liampie. I Laughed for quite a while at the "shitpiles down the waterfalls" part! :lol:

    But seriously, thank you for taking the time to offer constructive criticism on this. This might be finished some day, but for now I'm completely stuck on it and I wanted to share it since I don't foresee myself returning to this in the near future.
    posted 13 years ago
  • Luigi%s's Photo
    Netherlands Luigi Offline
    This really looked awesome in the AD. Shame to see this released unfinished. It had some strong points, but you should really work on your architecture. The ideas you have are really fantastic though.
    posted 13 years ago