Transmission... ... Sub: Building concepts ... To: Gen. Patton ... Date: October 15, 2024 - - - - - Concept design of the new TechFederation Complex is moving forward as planned. Attached is part of a drawing of the first building to be constructed. This building will be the main office building throughout the station, and will serve as the hub of all TF Staff.
Please note that the attached sketch is not final, but is much larger than shown. The building features two such towers, as well as a substantial middle section.
Within the week we hope to have more to offer, but unexpected delays may occur. I will do my best to keep this project running smoothly, and we hope to have the complex and flight simulator complete before the end of November.
Transmission... ... Sub: RE: Building concepts ... To: Dr. Grey ... Date: October 15, 2024 - - - - - I appreciate you message, Dr. Grey, and I'm hopeful for your progress. I must warn you, however, that we need this installation to be completed as quickly as possible, but still to yours and our own high expectations.
Keep me informed of your progress.
Gen. Patton TechFederation Administration - - - - -
- - - - - Transmission... ... Sub: RE: Building concepts ... To: Gen. Patton ... Date: October 16, 2024 - - - - - I assure you, General, that this project will be completed, by any means necessary. I understand the consequences of failure, but that will not be a problem.
I know it isn't much, but here is another section of the concept art we've drawn up for the office/personell building. The building from the last message has been since completed, and I will inform you of furthur progress.
Dr. Grey Project Administrator - - - - -
TechFederation Office/Personell Building Concept Art:
I'm now about 75% complete with this, but that remaining 25% is the coaster...Which is proving to be very difficult. In anycase, please comment on the screens above. I've worked really hard on this, and I think it's my best work to date. Oh, and yes, it was inspired by Titan's X2.
Those screens remind me a lot of Titan's X-Men park, which is a good thing.
Anyway, the screens are wondeful. I don't like those cycads in the first screen though. They seem out of place, and I personally think they are ugly.
Thanks. I'll see what I can do about those cyads. I was experimenting with things then, but I think I've gotten better as I went through the park. I'll get it changed.
BTW, I forget to say that this is 50x50 (my first completed park), and will feature one coaster, which is planned to fly through a city-ish thing, while making several inversions and the like. Something like a flight simulator, as mentioned in the first post/transmission.
Blah, I've typed too much today, and I'm making no sense at all.
I'd say this was inspired by X2 a little too much...
Certain aspects look completely the same. Still, imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, i suppose...
I'd still like you to try something completely new. Sure, it takes skill to build what you have done, but it takes even more skill to build a completely new theme...
It looks good. Very. Although its not as easy to copy someones work as people think, it still is too heavily influenced. Still finish this, just try to keep the underwater tunnel out eh?
Your next peice of work should be your ideas, mixed with more and more of your ideas. Its much more rewarding in the end.
As everyone else has said, it is heavily inflenced by other peoples work. Even so, it looks fantastic. It has an amazing futuristic feel to it and the architecture is solid. Could get repetitive though. Fantastic job though, your best work so far IMO. The future theme is catching on recently and both yours and steves parks are great. Well done.
Ya, I know it is heavily influenced by his park, but I had too start somewhere. I took what he had, built on it, and added my own twists. There's still my own ideas in the park, and I think you'll see that more once I've finished it and you can open it up for yourself.
In any case, I'll be working on the coaster alot more tonight, and I'll have an update once I think I've done enough. This will be the last update though, since it is a small park.
A simple pic of the coaster. I'll come up with a story with the download, like - it'll be in a notepad file in the zip. Don't wanna type it all right now.
I haven't seen Lilo & Stitch in ages. I guess that was the name of the...company(?) that Stitch came from? I don't remember, although it could have been a subconscious decision using this name.
I think inspiration is an understatement, but it still looks good. I like the use of the yellow poles. Do you think you could finish it by the time PureCoasters opens? This could be an exclusive download there. Great job.
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Transmission...
... Sub: Building concepts
... To: Gen. Patton
... Date: October 15, 2024
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Concept design of the new TechFederation Complex is moving forward as planned. Attached is part of a drawing of the first building to be constructed. This building will be the main office building throughout the station, and will serve as the hub of all TF Staff.
Please note that the attached sketch is not final, but is much larger than shown. The building features two such towers, as well as a substantial middle section.
Within the week we hope to have more to offer, but unexpected delays may occur. I will do my best to keep this project running smoothly, and we hope to have the complex and flight simulator complete before the end of November.
Dr. Grey
Project Administrator
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TechFederation Concept Art:
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Transmission...
... Sub: RE: Building concepts
... To: Dr. Grey
... Date: October 15, 2024
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I appreciate you message, Dr. Grey, and I'm hopeful for your progress. I must warn you, however, that we need this installation to be completed as quickly as possible, but still to yours and our own high expectations.
Keep me informed of your progress.
Gen. Patton
TechFederation Administration
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Transmission...
... Sub: RE: Building concepts
... To: Gen. Patton
... Date: October 16, 2024
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I assure you, General, that this project will be completed, by any means necessary. I understand the consequences of failure, but that will not be a problem.
I know it isn't much, but here is another section of the concept art we've drawn up for the office/personell building. The building from the last message has been since completed, and I will inform you of furthur progress.
Dr. Grey
Project Administrator
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TechFederation Office/Personell Building Concept Art:
TechFederation Training Facility
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I'm now about 75% complete with this, but that remaining 25% is the coaster...Which is proving to be very difficult. In anycase, please comment on the screens above. I've worked really hard on this, and I think it's my best work to date. Oh, and yes, it was inspired by Titan's X2.
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YAY! No complaints. I like it very very very much.
hobbes Offline
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Those screens remind me a lot of Titan's X-Men park, which is a good thing.
Anyway, the screens are wondeful. I don't like those cycads in the first screen though. They seem out of place, and I personally think they are ugly.
Great work, though.
That is all.
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hobbes Offline
BTW, I forget to say that this is 50x50 (my first completed park), and will feature one coaster, which is planned to fly through a city-ish thing, while making several inversions and the like. Something like a flight simulator, as mentioned in the first post/transmission.
Blah, I've typed too much today, and I'm making no sense at all.
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Certain aspects look completely the same. Still, imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, i suppose...
I'd still like you to try something completely new. Sure, it takes skill to build what you have done, but it takes even more skill to build a completely new theme...
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Richie Offline
It looks good. Very. Although its not as easy to copy someones work as people think, it still is too heavily influenced. Still finish this, just try to keep the underwater tunnel out eh?
Your next peice of work should be your ideas, mixed with more and more of your ideas. Its much more rewarding in the end.
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hobbes Offline
In any case, I'll be working on the coaster alot more tonight, and I'll have an update once I think I've done enough. This will be the last update though, since it is a small park.
Thanks for all the comments and suggestions.
hobbes Offline
Don't wanna type it all right now.
Anyway, here's the coaster, before theming.
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OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
I think you could add a flower bed where the supports are in the middle.
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Thanks for the comment though.