At first look I thought 'hey that's a cool helix thing' but on closer inspection it looks a bit awkward, especially with the little dip underneath to get ready for the turnaround. There must be a way of getting it to flow more easily. Hmm.
Also, I hope this isn't another rct2 park with shitloads of water everywhere...
I too don't like this screen as much as the previous.
I completely agree with mantis and blitz. That turnaround element not only looks akward, but also seems impractical. I'd tinker with it, mostly. The rest of the screen is actually quite nice, yet sparse. Definitely a decent park you have going here.
Screens 1 & 2: I don't really like the dark brown with the blue, white and peach. But, I don't know what color could be substituted, I guess the duller brown might be better.
Screen 3: My favorite so far. Nice work!
Screen 4: Really good. I don't like that building in the center of the picture though. It looks to plain compared to your third screen.
Keep up the good work,
Clockwork
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Screens 1 & 2: I don't really like the dark brown with the blue, white and peach. But, I don't know what color could be substituted, I guess the duller brown might be better.
Screen 3: My favorite so far. Nice work!
Screen 4: Really good. I don't like that building in the center of the picture though. It looks to plain compared to your third screen.
Keep up the good work, Clockwork
But if the colors where Purple with black the Buildings where ugly
i can't say i care for it. it looks like a slob/steve/turtle park enfuse some of your own style into it then i think i would like it more.
edit: i reread this and would like to say i have nothing against slob, turtle, or steve they are great parkmakers and this is their style and they have mastered it and it looks great but it seems everyone is trying to pull something off that really is somebody else's style. so in conclusion <3 to everyone.
i can't say i care for it. it looks like a slob/steve/turtle park enfuse some of your own style into it then i think i would like it more.
edit: i reread this and would like to say i have nothing against slob, turtle, or steve they are great parkmakers and this is their style and they have mastered it and it looks great but it seems everyone is trying to pull something off that really is somebody else's style. so in conclusion <3 to everyone.
Before i release this i'd like to say 90% of this work is really old. I finished it yesterday. I thought it would be good if i finished the project that i first started. I love this park seeing as it got me into my club and everything so i thought it needed to be completed.
When i first started building this park i did'nt know who slob was so i don't know how i could be trying to pull his style off. I obviously know him now and yes turtle has been an influence for my style in this park but for my first solo im extremley proud of it.
I really like the park. I do think you should change the colors of the canvas awning like Levis said (and how did you get 48 million pounds in only 50 years? I would only have around 5 million!) :' />
I really like the park. I do think you should change the colors of the canvas awning like Levis said (and how did you get 48 million pounds in only 50 years? I would only have around 5 million!) :' />
i can't say i care for it. it looks like a slob/steve/turtle park enfuse some of your own style into it then i think i would like it more.
edit: i reread this and would like to say i have nothing against slob, turtle, or steve they are great parkmakers and this is their style and they have mastered it and it looks great but it seems everyone is trying to pull something off that really is somebody else's style. so in conclusion <3 to everyone.
are you serious?
j k, the park is very pleasant to look at but doesn't do much more in my opinion.
Thanks alot. I know this park is'nt anything groundbreaking but most of the work was done ages ago when i was'nt too good. But i wanted to get it finished, it was pretty stupid letting a near complete solo go to waste.
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Levis Offline
your buildings are a bit simpeler now, the previeus screen was better because the builings had better shapes.
the custom supports you use I don't like either , maybe you can improve them or just let the original supports (they are also good ).
I personaly don't like the blue you use in the canvas roof, maybe you can change that in a other color also .
but the screen still looks very good .
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Also, I hope this isn't another rct2 park with shitloads of water everywhere...
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Such a small turn before a series of elements like that... it will be either be too fast on the turn, or too slow on the helix. Therefore, bad pacing.
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I completely agree with mantis and blitz. That turnaround element not only looks akward, but also seems impractical. I'd tinker with it, mostly. The rest of the screen is actually quite nice, yet sparse. Definitely a decent park you have going here.
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Screen 3: My favorite so far. Nice work!
Screen 4: Really good. I don't like that building in the center of the picture though. It looks to plain compared to your third screen.
Keep up the good work,
Clockwork
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Coming Soon.
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edit: i reread this and would like to say i have nothing against slob, turtle, or steve they are great parkmakers and this is their style and they have mastered it and it looks great but it seems everyone is trying to pull something off that really is somebody else's style. so in conclusion <3 to everyone.
Edited by chapelz, 25 March 2006 - 10:58 PM.
Turtle Offline
The building is ok, but seems insignificant.
Evil WME Offline
are you serious?
J K Offline
When i first started building this park i did'nt know who slob was so i don't know how i could be trying to pull his style off. I obviously know him now and yes turtle has been an influence for my style in this park but for my first solo im extremley proud of it.
Your'll be seeing it soon anyway.
Edited by J K, 26 March 2006 - 06:38 AM.
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8 Cars! Try it out.
http://forums.nedesi...showtopic=13363
JK, this is looking nice. I like the 1/4 tile works you've got, especially the little waterfalls. Keep it up.
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j k, the park is very pleasant to look at but doesn't do much more in my opinion.
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