but youre walls are a bit empty and dissapointing , maybe you could add something to youre walls to give it the WOW factor .
the aquaducts are nice but why don't making a turn in it ?
the function of putting flower under those poles I don't get and I don't like it either, maybe you could change that .
the water is niceley done but the borders are a bit borin, why don't you put a wall there to remove those ungly land borders (I sugest those ruin walls).
and why don't you make it youre self a bit more challanging and don't make buildings of 4*4 but give the bottom a strange shape, in that way you can give a lot more to it (balcony's etc.)
ontheless it looks pretty good .
sorry fot my bad engelish, I see I need to practice more at school
I am really liking this park of yours JK, like others have said, i can see you've got a lot of potential to be great, just with those few little touches, you'll be on yur way in no time
It has an overall nice feel that is easy enough to achieve, but I really admire the little things of brilliance that aren't often, if ever, done. Things like the vines on the land side near the top of the first screen and the single wide path in that last one outside the theater give what initially seems to be a turtle or artist park some defining characteristics. If I could recommend anything, it would be to put more foliage hanging off the buildings.
I really admire the little things of brilliance that aren't often, if ever, done. Things like the vines on the land side near the top of the first screen
Vines on land slides? I had plenty of those on Monsoon Mountain; maybe a bit too many....
Levis: I will add more detail to the walls, thanks for the advice.
Blah188: Thanks dude
PBJ: Im not bothered about mirror mode, i agree it should'nt be done that much. All ive done is packed the building with detail so the mirrored building is'nt really a problem.
Xenon: Thanks glad its better.
Phantage: Hanging foliage would definatly help the 3d cinema, thanks alot for the comments.
Jazz: The wooden coaster in monsoon moutain rocks.
I wanted to go for a contrast from the white buildings as i thought too much could of been to repetetive. So heres a new screen of the "Kids Kingdom" Its shows the kids coaster and some of the small shops around the jungle themed area.
Its very good, maybe make the flower arrangement a little more organised and add a few more bushes underneath the coaster maybe. Not bad apart from that.
Overall, this screen is excellent, except for a few nit picks of mine.
1. I don't like the brown track; theres not enough contrast
2. To me, the wagon wheels, wood piles and barrels feel out of place and kind of litter the awesome atmosphere you have going
3. I don't like the "X" shaped roofs. I prefer "V" roofs, but thats just me.
Still, this is great stuff. You're definitely on my "watch list" right now.
You are a very talented parkmaker, I see much potential. I agree with Jkay on all of his points; especially the track color. Contrast would make this screen nearly perfect, IMO. It's also refreshing to see something other than the white.
Just a screen to show some of the progress ive made, the park is coming along well and i am very happy with it so far. This screen shows another restaurant near the coast of Sikinos with a shot of Sparta the parks B&M.
This screen is'nt totally finished yet IMO it need a bit of tweeking enjoy.
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The cycad bushes arn't staying
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-PM
Levis Offline
but youre walls are a bit empty and dissapointing , maybe you could add something to youre walls to give it the WOW factor .
the aquaducts are nice but why don't making a turn in it ?
the function of putting flower under those poles I don't get and I don't like it either, maybe you could change that .
the water is niceley done but the borders are a bit borin, why don't you put a wall there to remove those ungly land borders (I sugest those ruin walls).
and why don't you make it youre self a bit more challanging and don't make buildings of 4*4 but give the bottom a strange shape, in that way you can give a lot more to it (balcony's etc.)
ontheless it looks pretty good .
sorry fot my bad engelish, I see I need to practice more at school
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i'm noy a huge fan of a "mirror-mode" in RCT... if you get me right.
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Vines on land slides? I had plenty of those on Monsoon Mountain; maybe a bit too many....
~Jazz~
J K Offline
Levis: I will add more detail to the walls, thanks for the advice.
Blah188: Thanks dude
PBJ: Im not bothered about mirror mode, i agree it should'nt be done that much. All ive done is packed the building with detail so the mirrored building is'nt really a problem.
Xenon: Thanks glad its better.
Phantage: Hanging foliage would definatly help the 3d cinema, thanks alot for the comments.
Jazz: The wooden coaster in monsoon moutain rocks.
Jazz Offline
~Jazz~
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J K Offline
I wanted to go for a contrast from the white buildings as i thought too much could of been to repetetive. So heres a new screen of the "Kids Kingdom" Its shows the kids coaster and some of the small shops around the jungle themed area.
Enjoy
JK
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Edited by JDP, 14 November 2005 - 05:44 PM.
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JKay Offline
1. I don't like the brown track; theres not enough contrast
2. To me, the wagon wheels, wood piles and barrels feel out of place and kind of litter the awesome atmosphere you have going
3. I don't like the "X" shaped roofs. I prefer "V" roofs, but thats just me.
Still, this is great stuff. You're definitely on my "watch list" right now.
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Jazz Offline
~Jazz~
J K Offline
Just a screen to show some of the progress ive made, the park is coming along well and i am very happy with it so far. This screen shows another restaurant near the coast of Sikinos with a shot of Sparta the parks B&M.
This screen is'nt totally finished yet IMO it need a bit of tweeking enjoy.