Park / A Christmas Carol

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  Jaguar Offline

  Ooooh! Lookin' good. I especially like that first screen. Nothing to complain about really, except to MAYBE add some color to your foliage right there. Just a few flowers, nothing big.
  
  Second screen is good, full of nice ideas, the Batmobile is about as good as it gets in RCT- props. I also really like the Snowy's water fun place, but that's it? Add some more water features in there! Imagine 10 kids trying to crowd around those 5 or 6 little fountains, that'd be terrible! Imagine all the broken little bones... Add 2 or 3 more fountains in there to help out those kiddies. Also, add some black to your archy, Gotham in the comics was always either rainy and bleak or the sky was red and there was crime in the air. Right now I don't think you're portraying that enough in the little bit of architecture in that screen.
  
  Filler architecture... meh... not bad, but there's nothing that wows me. Although, if this is filler that's perfect, so don't change the archy itself.
  
  One thing I WOULD change, though, as mentioned above, is the boring grey tarmac path. Add a few more planters or make the current one you have be larger, because right now it's way too small for the size of the path around it. I'd also change the fencing around it to something more "solid" if you know what I mean.
  
  Other than that, awesome job. Can't wait until the next update!

  
  You mean this?
  
  When I won HH, Wolfman got angry and insulted me. He said that his park was better, and complained. I got really pissed off and told him that I actually voted for him. Next time I checked the thread, both those comments were deleted by admins. I do actually wonder if Wolfman is either under 12 years old, or has a mental disability. He argues whenever someone corrects him or points out something. I wonder if he can be considered worse than Kevin_Enns or GigaG were at posting.

  posted 15 years ago

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