Jak

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I also added a Dollar General that sits right next to the coaster.

Nice screen! I love the way the dark brown walls and the black roofs work together. I do think that the log flume could use some more detail though.

Thanks all! Very happy with a bronze for this. Really hoping to improve on my next project. I’ll keep y’all updated.

This is a great submission Jak, and shows huge improvement from Maverick.  Its quite interesting really, feels like you take a bit of inspiration from older NE realism, from the likes of Nokia, or Comet back in 2009-2010 era before NE really settled into the CP6/Robbie realism styles that we still use today.
 
The foliage is probably the most awkard bit for me, seems a bit random and isn't quite as convincing as the rest of the submission.  Maybe look a bit more at high scoring realistic parks from the last few years to see how they clump foliage and manage density.
 
Archy wise you have some good structures here, but perhaps rely on walls a bit too much.  Shotguns always said that a lot of cso players get tricked into exclusively using actual wall objects for their buildings, when deco blocks would be more convincing and liberating.  
 
Finding real life reference would really help here too, just to get a feel for how real buildings look and are shaped.  Because aesthetically you do a good job, just that some of the shapes and structures aren't quite convincing in a realistic sense.
 
Overall, nice work, and like I said a big improvement.  Look forward to more.

Thanks all for the compliments and suggestions! And yes gforce you’re absolutely right. Some of my favorite parks are some of those older classic realistic parks so I do take a lot of inspiration from them. I’ll definitely try to up my architecture and foliage in my next project. Thanks

The animal exhibits look great and the colors work really well together. The coaster looks very true to the original. Great Screen!