Sibelius

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Good improvement!  Keep doing this and you'll be raking in accolades in no time.

 

Thanks! beginning this one small project has given me so much respect for the amount of work that goes into parks on here, like your WoF. 

someone voted 100%...wonder who .

 

I agree about the mcbr coming soon.  Could use one more element beforehand maybe.  The pullout of the first drop and beginning of the ascent into the pretzel looks a bit sharp.  I like the uniqueness of the layout tho.  Btw, there are extra pieces you can get for the slanted supports so you don't have to make the extra tall footers.

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Slight improvement I think.  Need to figure out what to do with the ruins, either integrate them better or remove.  

 

Will also mess around w the turn between the corks.  I had copied the one in Zippos I think, I'll see if I can find a better solution.

 

If I manage to get in some nice archy and themeing, do yall think this would be a decent candidate for my first design submission?

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Today I attempted some foliage, etc.  I really have no idea what I'm doing foliage wise so any advice is appreciated!

Yeah - I'm sort of anal about little details like that . Takes me forever to do anything. Gotta think more big picture I guess