nfg0517

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This looks great I think your using the colors available very well but one thing. Some of the paths going into your buildings need to be wider. And I also think you should get rid of those half tent roofs they dont look good.

Hey thanks for reviewing mine...

I think youve got a good start to this park. But about the mine train:


I dont know if the pink color necessarily works for the track

The archy on that building hanging over the ride could be better (good idea though)

And as for that mountian you need to add some more trees and or plants and i think personally the rock look itself should be more random (Like varying heights)


As for Guernica That is gonna be a crazy ride when its themed. The layout is solid except I do agree about the end

The Brown doesn't look bad by any means, its just boring. I suggest taking the paintbrush to some of your walls and especially those TT Pirate Roofs to add some accents of color like what you did with the red building. Also those arches look great. I definitley agree with Coaster Wizard that you have too many windows. And the archy is crowded to the fact that the path is almost not visible in some ares. Maybe you should make the paths wider in some parts.

Im not very good at this so can u help me out a lil. How can I make it so u guys can see it

I have looked at both Fantastic Wonders and Wormwood extensively (RCT 1 doesnt work on my computer for some reason). Until Fantastic Wonders came out i thought that Wormwood was amazing. Even still it is very different and creative, but (no offense to Aero21) after looking at Timothy Cross's Park, the luster of Wormwood almost disapears. Maybe it is the shear size but Fantastic Wonders seems to be so much more alive. Coaster Ed put it nicely to relate this park to Disneyland because it does have that fantastival sense to it while still staying within the realistic realm. The park itself even has the same basic makeup of a Disney Park(Center circle with themed areas branching off). The only negative thing I can say about this park is the coasters. Truthfully, there is not one coaster in that park that i would be dieing to go on, but i guess thats not the point of that park. Great job Timothy and you certainly deserve a parkmaker's page in my opinion.