ottersalad

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Firstly, agree with everything Sammy said. Quite annoying to have to mute a park because it's a cacophony of music that all blends together and is very startling. In terms of "noise".. there's also too much visual noise in this park. 7000+ peeps packed into this small park is a couple thousand too many! 

Some cool stuff throughout the park though. I liked the layouts for the most park, the fully realized city surroundings. Thoughtful ideas. Albeit the less flashy rides, Roller Coaster and Euro-Fighter were two of my favorites. 

Would be curious to see in your next work perhaps more breathing room for rides and buildings.. some negative space sprinkled in. Totally agree again with Sammy that playing with space will massively help your composition skills. 

Very interesting park - feels like a time capsule. When did this park get started? I get this early 2010's vibe looking at this park. Some really nice bits of architecture throughout too. The more I look at this park, the more I like. 

The hotel, the bungalows, the archy by Wyrm.. all really cool. 

Pleasant, and feels quite standard at first glance in terms of the coaster layout and the supporting cast of rides. But, once you actually get down to the micro level there's quite a lot here to like. Personally I'm absolutely baffled on how you did the coaster supports.. would be curious to learn how you did that. 

Layout seems like a faithful recreation which is important to me if that's what you intended to do. Pacing seemed a bit slow though. Didn't get the frantic breakneck pacing that an RMC tends to have.

In terms of other comments thus far, I tend to agree with Turtle and Posix. Outside of the amazing supports, tricks, peep scenes, etc the park surroundings seems a bit plain and simple. But again, the micro detailing here is stellar. Would also love to learn how to do all these cool custom vehicles and peep scenes. 

I'm not sure when the contest was for this.. a month ago, a year ago, 3 years ago.. so I'm sure you've already heard these critiques and comments.. and have continued to grow as a builder. Excited to see what you got cooking next.

Very nice stuff. Muted palette and small color selection works well here.

Agree with posix.. little bit too noisy for me. Drop your ISO settings and perhaps lower your f-stop. You'll get more smooth and crisp photos in no time.

Or don't use 2 colors on every fisch rock piece!