Triksiludo

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• Norway

Only thing i want to comment is the lowest section, the objects look... strange

Looking good tom25489

Will you do my request for quarter tiled rooves too?

^the hanging off doors are shutters. alot of parks seem to have them and i like it.

It looks really out of place without anything below it...

Hmm... much better

Still there's the paths, but the one thing questioning my mind ATM, is:

Why are the doors just hanging there?

Booby traps?

^I agree with Rage, the textures you've chosen don't seem to fit the theme you are going for....
I see no wooden walls or textures, and the whole screen is lacking atmosphere. I think the paths are to blame for most of the bad atmosphere, and the screen looks so 'flat'. Give it another hill or something, the flat path on the lowest section looks dull.
Vary the paths more, instead of putting an outline
And also, as said before, use more windows, but not on every wall. Instead of some windows, use textures

I hope I'm not too rough, as you asked for suggestions

Btw, what is up with NE and jagged land?